WORKING TITLE
This is the page dedicated to my first visual novel project, WORKING TITLE. That's what it's called.
The image for the game is placeholder and will be replaced upon release, it's the only thing I had handy that fit the dimensions.
All images currently in the game are placeholder.
The story is simple; there's an intro, then one character makes a choice, a second character makes a choice, and then there's an outcome. Four possible endings. Almost.
This is an autobiographical story about a confused young man coming to terms with his identity.
Things get weird when you go for the second ending.
The full game ends at New Game++. Less than an hour long total(?).
Feedback is appreciated.
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where's jay
I've never really made a visual novel before so I don't know if my feedback is all that valid, but I do think there's potential here. Especially in your idea of creating a autobiographical video game, but be sure to be showing instead of telling the player information. I think that's why games containing so much story and lore are quite long. Every piece of info is delivered in a discreet way. Of course, sometimes this can be broken, although it should fit within the context and/or not be so long as to bore the player or disconnect them from that "invested in the game" mind setting.
-This is just my take on the game.
P.S. The part when you started talking to your past self was absolutely amazing.